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David_Delgado

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2018-07-15 JoinedGlobal
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado3mth
    Commented

    me to vote here

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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado3mth
    Commented

    yes

    1. Yes
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado3mth
    Commented
    2. White
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado3mth
    Commented

    For the emperor

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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Posted

    wonderful story I hope I could see more chapters in the future and see what type of possibilities he could do I like you could do anything he want to do and I hope he could build his self a base became a scientist or a way to rebuild the wasteland to explore around the world and of course a lot of rated 18+ keep it up I know you could make the best story and I hope I can see more PS go brotherhood I hope he could rise the rank that he could control the brotherhood or small group of it hey you could capture the institute and all the research areas even the casino place where they have those that creation machines where we call it I be happy to see what he could do

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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    here's a few items resources all the resources in the Star wars clone troopers and droids a base to build your own base to use I would love to say the star forge but I bet it too expensive also make obvious price changes were clones are more expensive because they're fully trained fully armed pretty much the best clone you could have where droids are cheap supposable machines because of how cheap they are and how you could make a bunch of them of course it's a penny of what Droid you're going for more better joy to be more expensive also I like the story I hope you keep going with it I will put some stones if I keep saying more pages in the future

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    I'm fine with that but I hope to see more chapters I love to read more.

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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    thx for the chapter hope I see more.

    Ch 7 Hey, you. you're finaly awake.
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    thank you for your wonderful chapter

    Ch 6 Capture all of the squadron
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Posted

    I love this story and hope I see more in the future. C&C and Red alert game is my favorite game. I love to see more story of it.[img=update]

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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    amazing story I'm always happy when you bring new chapters out. Here's my idea is it possible he could customize machines as a sample what if he have an idea to take Terminator as a tank and the females bot will be assassins snipers or a quick gunman or stay the original style with swords oh and I almost forgot seeing you can make machines I wonder you will add mods on them like hacking ability speed boost jetpacks you know all kinds of things and upgrades they could have. I can't wait for the next one and I like to know what you think.

    Ch 3 Warning to leave!
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    wow you can't stop amazing me the story became so amazing I can't wait for the next chapter you doing so well for now I don't see any problems but of course that's my point of view keep it up I can't wait to see the next chapter. also I have idea you could try to pick a hero to train the main character seeing he most likely be going out once in a while or at least have a way he could get stronger slowly or faster your choice of that one and I have a question will he have access of all command and conquer and red alert game.

    Ch 1 Player 1 Join the game
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    nice keep it up

    Ch 7 Cooking a Bird
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    nice 👍

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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    I love it make more I can't wait to see what will happen to the security guard.

    Ch 2 Ch. - 2: Night One - Virginity Saved?
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
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    yay new chapter. I have an idea you could add there is a mod in Red alert 3 called remix mod pretty much a mod to improve Red alert 3 add new units better system and many others. I also hope you could add all the factions of command and conquer and red alert. with they're all technology units buildings abilities knowledge and power that's my idea and I will love to see what you can do with it. great story keep going and I will continue reading your wonderful story of yours.

    Ch 6 Beggining of the Vystal Tournament
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Replied to Souleye123

    it's okay I just get excited for new stories and can't wait what type of possibilities you can write down I just think ahead of what type of things you could add next or what type of characters you going to put what type of units you could have what type of possibilities you could make I just get excited for new stories and stories with great possibilities I'm glad you keep making this story and hope I could see more in the future.

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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    yea my favorite game Command & Conquer. I love your story already it's been so long to see Command & Conquer story. I hope you keep making more of them. and I hope I can see more Command & Conquer and Red alert. with mods are a creativity ability to create characters buildings units vehicles equipment like create a mod of your own. I love to see how the story will go and who knows maybe you have a great idea to world travel and different games like Halo, Warhammer 40K, Star wars, Minecraft, Terraria, Starbound, marvel, DC, random anime, movies, games, what type of possibility I would love to see where you take it to stay in one world or to travel in the multiverse to using mods or simply living his life with a simple Command & Conquer system I love to see what possibilities you will put in this story

    Ch 5 Recruiting local people
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    nice 👍

    Ch 2 Chapter - 1
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  • David_Delgado
    David_Delgado1yr
    Commented

    nice 👍

    Ch 1 Ch. - 1: Night One - Introduction to the New World
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