Most things are kinda mid. This one isn't. Its good. Beautiful descriptions and a worldbuilding that is solid, really it stands out from the rest pretty easily. If you struggle to find a book where the main character isn't a racist, rapist, mass murdering psycho where he kills all the way to the families dog, and instead just want a story about people that could actually exist. Then here it is.

If you just want to read a power fantasy nonsense for a second then here you are but if you are looking for a quality novel go elsewhere it isnt here.

Yalready know he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he he Nah but its pretty solid although hasn't gone into the full on smut as of yet which is kinda what I came for but whatever im havin fun so far.

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To be honest its better than almost everything I have read on this site. If it was a rating system somewhere else I may or may not give it a 5/5 but for a webnovel aggregation site this is a diamond in the rough for sure. Great world building the characters goals and motivations are interesting and highly grounded and I find myself curious about what is to come. Good work author.

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If this wasn't an indie story I would use the ranking system differently because although there are flaws so far it is actually pretty decent. I do not think this story is particularly inspired or original but it does have its own somewhat unique flavor and I will be waiting for updates. I will say that the characters and the magic system so far are only really understandable because of prior knowledge on these types of systems and as someone who frequently reads books on this site. For a first time reader this will not make much sense and you will not be able to fill in the gaps but if you are like me and a veteran reader of these then it will do. Again this is an indie book from probably a young author and for that I will say that it is good. I am judging it based off of where the author is this is not J.K. Rowling at least not yet but this is a good start and has captured my attention. Anyways happy reading and writing its worth your time if you are familiar with these types of books since it lets you know what it will be extremely quickly. Ff you do not like the first or second chapter you wont like the rest but if they appeal to you then the rest you will like.

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This might be unfair to some people but I want to see this story idea fleshed out and explored so I am giving this review as an encouragement to the author.

interesting but if it continues down this road then there is no place for me what is interesting about reading a book is about seeing the mindscape of the author and understanding more about humanity and being able to be in the story but negary is just a cold unfeeling machine so no matter how good the plot is I do not care about him at all and if he died I would be glad maybe that's the point but its not my type of book no matter how good the writing is but also changing him to be a real emotional being would destroy the story as it stands so I think I just am incompatible with this book anyways pretty good so far.

I mean the writing quality is fantastic and the character design is excellent but sadly there is no reliable updates a total lack of world background and really the story development hasn't gone anywhere I mean maybe that's because there is only one paragraph but still it is always disappointing to see stories with so much potential just shot to death and ended when they have so much potential its kind of like when a kid dies compared to an old man there were so many possibilities waiting to be capitalized on that aren't going to be. Anyways check out my podcast its called CumTown.