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Xardsa year agoCommentedwhy the name chang from natsuki to xia mu?? the name xia mu = natsuki??could you chang xia mu to natsuki ist sound better
- Xardsa year agoCommented
chapter 13 to 18 are missing , could u upload them plz
- Xardsa year agoCommented
where ar chapters 13 to 15??
- Xardsa year agoCommented
oh this storyis so great i love it. plz write more chaps
This book has been deleted. - Xards2 years agoCommented
could you write a warhammer 40k story plz from the pespective of a humane civilien to space marine (if you do plz dont use one of the normal chapters, use some like the last loyalist war groups of theiron warriors ). i realy liked your star wars story, it was a great read and i reread it often. srry for spelling mistakes englisch is not my motherlanguage.
- Xards2 years agoCommented
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- Xards2 years agoCommented
will u comtimue this story ?
- Xards2 years agoCommented
the names are partly wrong and i can not follow the story , because of wrong translation or spelling . the start was great but it got bad after chapter 17 .
- Xards3 years agoReplied to Corum_4752
it is a greagte chapter and i hope zou can hold on to this quallity until the last chapter.
