Even though it's nowhere near original, it's so well written that i couldn't stop reading. Awesome job! ...Imagine a virtual reality game with a 100% immersion rate, you can't remember it's a game until it logs you out either in death or if you finish it (by killing the demon, if i wanted to build on this for example), that's a trauma engine... just an idle thought

True enough. And Vahn may have human lapses but he doesn't keep an idiot ball in his pocket nor is EPIC a story of contrived plot twists to suddenly depower him for a fight or two

Well, EPIC is always fun but idk i feel like the story kind of ended after he reunited with Eva... at that point the rest of his journey in that world felt like a victory parade... The thing is that it feels like it hasn't ended, as if the tower and beyond is just part of it... the templates and actualized worlds accerbated that feeling as he doesn't even need to actually risk anything to travel to a new reality... he might as well turn back to danmachi and be done with it... except he kind of already did? even if it's through dreams he kind of has a direct path to his family at any point and time so it doesn't even feel like there's a destination anymore... honestly, it's been an amazing work but at this point I'm more interested in NOICE... even if I run back at every update of EPIC, [img=recommend]