LadyMomoko
I am from Romania and I like to read, to crochet and play games.
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LadyMomoko7dCommentedwhy is it Shivani now, before it was Shilo?
Shivani had a melancholic expression as she visited the kitchen remembering some memories.detailThe Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely lifeFantasy ¡ The_Sweet_Dumpling- LadyMomoko21dCommented
This is good, it is just one repeated paragraph from the previous chapter. Thank youđ
If Sean was going to marry Dwight he would of course need to follow where Dwight is. If Dwight is still in Layton Lewis' Army which is still assigned at the border Sean also needs to stay at the border. - LadyMomoko21dCommented
*Lyre not Ryzel
"I did ask my brother to beat up that bast*rd Dwight for Ry but he didn't say anything when he got home so I assume he didn't do that. Oops-" Ryzel stopped what he was saying and awkwardly smiled while looking at Layton Lewis and Mervin. - LadyMomoko22dCommentedCh 462 Brewing Wars (Part 2)
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Please don't start a new chapter by repeating too much from the previous chapter. For me it breaks the flow of the story. If you have to repeat a bit of the previous chapter 1 or 2 paragraphs is ok, but not more than that.
Ch 32 Chapter 31: Eating Breakfast Prepared by the General, Part 2 - LadyMomoko1mthCommented
Is it possible that she is pregnant again?
She went to the cocoa tree. She remembered craving for chocolate in her pregnancy. Was it because she wasn't unsatisfied at the time that she was getting these cravings again? - LadyMomoko1mthCommented
maybe "wasn't unsatisfied" should be "was unsatisfied" or "wasn't satisfied", but I am not sure
She went to the cocoa tree. She remembered craving for chocolate in her pregnancy. Was it because she wasn't unsatisfied at the time that she was getting these cravings again? - LadyMomoko1mthCommentedCh 425 Level 10!
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so he also *has* one.
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2 times 200 units of wood? is there a mistake?
- Building Costs: 200 units of wood, 200 units of wood, and 20 silver coins]detailThe Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely lifeFantasy ¡ The_Sweet_Dumpling - LadyMomoko2mthCommented
did you mean to use baffling instead of bluffing ?
Long Haoran's pupils constricted and he was too late to block it. However, when he though he would perished, he did not feel pain at all and what's more bluffing was his HP only dropped by [-50] points.detailThe Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely lifeFantasy ¡ The_Sweet_Dumpling - LadyMomoko2mthCommented
I think it should be Little Lotus, if I remember correctly Little Mantou is the fox
Little Ginseng and Little Mantou spent a minute fanning away the dust to regain their views of the field, and what they saw made them drop their lower jaws on the ground.detailThe Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely lifeFantasy ¡ The_Sweet_Dumpling - LadyMomoko2mthCommented
Altera not Althea. I am thinking you were referring to the village.
It was also a plan that would inevitably place Althea in a lot of people's maps. - LadyMomoko3mthCommented
A slight mistake: it just said that it has 52 000 hp, and now it went up.
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prosthetic hand*
After a while, Jiang Zhi added seriously, "Don't worry, we'll find you a prosthetic leg when we go hunting out of the base." - LadyMomoko3mthCommented
maybe less than half a century đ
After a while, Zhang Rui stopped crying. He looked at Jiang Zhi seriously. "I really can't believe the world would change so fast! I've only lived half a century and haven't had a partner. Why are people turning into zombies?" - LadyMomoko3mthCommentedCh 341 Reaching Althea
- LadyMomoko3mthCommentedCh 132 Li Chunhua, the Animal WhispererdetailThe Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely lifeFantasy ¡ The_Sweet_Dumpling
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You are
But why does she feel she was being kicked out?detailThe Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely lifeFantasy ¡ The_Sweet_Dumpling - LadyMomoko3mthCommented
Death points? Wasn't it supposed to be Earth points?Did I remember wrong? If I did, oh well đ¤ˇ, too lazy to check.
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