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Since the story is still in its early stages, I don't have much to criticize yet, but I'm enjoying the setting and the conversations with the characters; it feels aliveThe only thing I didn't like is that the fight scenes are very complex, so I sometimes skip a few lines (but I think that's a personal thing; some people like scenes like that).

Honestly, I came expecting nothing and found gold. I feel this story is alive amidst so much trash. This story reminded me why fanfics are goodWhen you find a good one like that, it's like finding a treasure in the beach.

It seems like I'm the only one who doesn't like a romance with Luvia; to me, she would be a besto friendo.

Very good writing, unlike 90% of the novels in this place the characters have life in this novel, I will be waiting for the chapters to accumulate and I will come back to read.

Very good story but I lost the hype when I saw that it was going to stay in the rwby world for a long time (I don't like this anime, I think it's boring), so maybe I'll wait to accumulate more chapters to get a summary of the arc and skip the rwby arc.

Well done story, one thing that is bothering me is that there are a lot of women (6 out of 40 caps)I'm afraid this will turn into a hentai written just with him having sex with his women.

Very well done story, I just found Alexia's romance very dull and the end of the second world didn't grab me to turn Alexia into a challenger with the system, it took away her main characteristic and that of the protagonist, I thought it was really cool that she almost replicated the system's techniques alone, I don't know.

I don't know, I just think it's all too fast in 3 chapters?

For those who like Yuri, Ein's novels are always a treat, but as I don't like them I always fall for the Yuri without the Yuri TAG, sad for me so I dropped it.

Every danmachi fic now is the character joining the Hephaestus family, sorry but I came to see something different and I'll drop it, but good luck with the ff.