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Well done story, one thing that is bothering me is that there are a lot of women (6 out of 40 caps)I'm afraid this will turn into a hentai written just with him having sex with his women.

Very well done story, I just found Alexia's romance very dull and the end of the second world didn't grab me to turn Alexia into a challenger with the system, it took away her main characteristic and that of the protagonist, I thought it was really cool that she almost replicated the system's techniques alone, I don't know.

I don't know, I just think it's all too fast in 3 chapters?

For those who like Yuri, Ein's novels are always a treat, but as I don't like them I always fall for the Yuri without the Yuri TAG, sad for me so I dropped it.

Every danmachi fic now is the character joining the Hephaestus family, sorry but I came to see something different and I'll drop it, but good luck with the ff.

Very extreme hatred for the LGBT community, I don't support this opinion, but I liked the writing, waiting for the author to grow up or suffer some prejudice to see a more decent story.

Honestly I can understand people's criticism and their frustration,,I think the core of the problem is being a "fanfic" the story is ready made, for those who know the universes involved, there are things that are not touched (like reading a komi-san fanfic with a harem, for me it is artificial already knowing the original story),That's why I think that if you made an original novel inspired by comics, animes with their own characters, there wouldn't be so many criticisms of the plot. (but then it depends on the person too,I don't know much about Marvel I don't really like harem but I'm enjoying this fanfic for now so I hope you keep writing and thanks for the work if you choose to stop writing.)

This is very happy for a fate.

Wait for a bald hero JUSTICE

Is the whole story going to be focused on sex? Or is it just the first few chapters? Honestly I liked the story but I feel weird reading smut, lemons etc.