Ruya
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Ruya1dCommentedCh 100 Chapter 98: Dragons and Snakes Arise from Land, Sand Refinement Pours River!- Ruya10dCommentedCh 288 Loss of Luck
- Ruya18dCommentedCh 50 Chapter 50 A Place to Stay
- Ruya1mthCommented
"[...] almost like that of an Immortal's." Since "of an Immortal" is grammatically equivalent to "an Immortal's," it would be more correct to write either "[...]almost like an Immortal's" or "[...] almost like that of an Immortal."
"Even though she's a little girl, her attitude and presence are beyond normal, almost like that of an Immortal's! Not to mention that she actually dared to take out a peak quality Heaven-grade weapon out in the open! Even idiots would not dare steal from her..." Senior Chang felt the chills just thinking about her. - Ruya2mthCommented
Major judgment failure here. One of the big parts of being a mature, responsible adult is recognizing that life often doesn't go as planned and making sure to have some failsafes in the event those unexpected outcomes are dangerous. Granted, not all adults are mature or responsible, and even those who are can still make mistakes. However, his uncle already demonstrated his ability to adapt and accommodate his nephew's unconventional genius. So, despite his slightly cavalier attitude, it stretches credulity that he never considered the possibility of his nephew surprising him and this escalating beyond his expectations. - Just - in - case -
Ch 22 Reflection - Ruya6mthCommented
Suggestion:"[...]choosing not to indulge[...]"I would suggest using "divulge" rather than "indulge" here, as the context suggests the meaning of revealing rather than partaking.
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"[...] should be quite legible. "This seems more in line with the meaning of "credible" or "trustworthy" rather than "legible" here, as the sentence has nothing to do with whether or not the information can be read.
Chu Lingjun stared at Zhou Anqi in surprise. After spending more than half a month with her, he learned that Zhou Anqi's father was from the military, so the authenticity of the news would be quite legible. - Ruya1yrReplied to SPCJohnDoeCh 70 Seeking Medical Help, Master Sanyang
- Ruya1yrCommentedCh 69 Divine Doctor? 10 Million Yuan Per Visit
- Ruya2yrCommented
Although regrettable from a species standpoint, it seems pretty normal for people to reserve the best of what they have for themselves.
Additionally, not all ability users had chosen to share their abilities with the outside world and some had decided to keep it exclusive to their own bloodline. Originals usually had the strongest of abilities that couldn't be measured using the power system.