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ZiegHart

ZiegHart

Lv13

love to read, read to love

2018-07-07 JoinedIndonesia
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  • ZiegHart
    ZiegHart9mth
    Posted

    nice and great read actually...from the writing is good, the concept is great, the pace is natural, characters have their development well written..actually to help new reader, or to better imagining the world, you could make a glossary of the world building, what known planet or something...and the power level of the Lord, and summon, what make them different etc.

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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • ZiegHart
    ZiegHart9mth
    Commented

    wait..isn't white feather should have met and know blue sea when raiding wolf guild?

    Ch 85 Chapter85-"The Mysterious One's" Identity
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    Sacrifice's Rise: I Became Invincible After Entering Godslayer Temple
    Fantasy · White_Ink
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  • ZiegHart
    ZiegHart1yr
    Posted

    actually this one has a good future, but dont know why but the story is rushed and everything just fall in to Mc's lap out of ñowhere... dont if the raw like this as well or its just the tl on here got the story "cut" so miserably

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    Awakening The Weakest Talent: Only I Level Up
    Urban · Solo Leveling
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  • ZiegHart
    ZiegHart2yr
    Commented

    so here the day 2, and before he log off and just a little nap

    Ch 23 Level Up the Skill Again!
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    Online Game: My Skills Can Be Upgraded Infinitely
    Games · Pro Power Leveling
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  • ZiegHart
    ZiegHart2yr
    Commented

    so, is it day 2 or day 3?? why he just use the level up on first day, and the description got chance to level up just say 2times a day, and not stack when not used, right?

    Ch 19 Mission Reward: Noah's Dagger!
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    Online Game: My Skills Can Be Upgraded Infinitely
    Games · Pro Power Leveling
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  • ZiegHart
    ZiegHart2yr
    Commented

    okay, at this point i think the story is good and have potential to go up... but one thing is please decide to use first person or third person pov, bcz sometimes it confusing

    Ch 3 Thunder-Fire Valley
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    The Tale of the Void Emperor
    Fantasy · LivingVoid
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  • ZiegHart
    ZiegHart2yr
    Commented

    dont say it that was a flag...

    Ch 167 167)Husband...
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    Unlucky?Player
    Games · Myth_7754
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