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He went with a girl to a mission for the sect, and as usual they encounter powerful enemies. The girl is injured and the hero defeats the enemies, then he rescues her by taking off her clothes and treating her and you know what will happen next. The author forces the hero to marry her, otherwise the girl will commit suicide and blah blah blah. The story was going well but this plot completely ruined the story with a forced plot that was absolutely unnecessary. The annoying thing is that the hero met the girl only three times!!!
The idea is good, but the implementation is not good. The story is going so fast, world building is unclear. The background of the main character is incomprehensible. Is this the same as his previous world or a new world, and how did he move to this world? The story needs to clarify and solve these problems. I think the novel has potential for growth, so I keep going. I apologize if the writing is incomprehensible. English is not my native language.