My one criticism would be the translator's use of the words "doughty" to describe how brave the FL is and "campy" to describe the romance. These two words will keep popping up. It really doesn't make sense as there are better adjectives to use. Overall, the novel is fine.

Wen Qing is a really annoying character, it's so hard to feel sorry for her. She's very wishy washy about her feelings. One day it's "okay, it's time to really let go" and the next minute she's all "but I can never let him go". Sigh.

It's so frustrating that neither the FL or ML can say what they are thinking. It's always "I'll tell you later". Quite irritating actually...

Mu Ziyu's possessiveness is really really irritating. I hope he changes...

How old is she, 15? How come she can order drinks for kids when she is a minor herself?

Overall story wasn't bad. It's good until chapter 441 (the end of the main story). But OMG, the secondary story of Yin Shuiling and Yin Muchen is just too much for me. Rape & miscarriage AND she was a minor when they started kissing. It's all a big fat mess. Disgusting actually. Would avoid those latter chapters.