i saw love at first sight (*cringing face*) romance? too early in the story...i want to say that in pokemon verse like this story,love is a lauxury for a weak bat.If u so insist in doing romance than better have it after the MC reach pinnacle.Yeah,most pokemon fans are into NOromance thingy So...haha.but still i endure that(*no problem face*)and continue reading and so i arive at this Ash page...how do i say it,its totally fine if protagonist lose battles sometime.I mean SOMETIME.and its the kind of battles that when lose its hurt so much but its for growth type.Not the type of battle that can win but for the sake of making the protagonist difficult(mainly to let reader know MC can also lose)just to fail to get the first position...Who want to read that(ash) in novel? Who want to read MC who just won't win for the sake of it? Surely Not me...its important to let MC win at some major points in story,like when it is the 1st place for the beginning plot etc..,MC can sometimes fail after that.And Where is this story going?Why is this story going to ash and clinch styles? Feel disapointed...So yeah this time i am out.(*not looking back face*)