Daoist_ye_feng
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loves reincarnation novels
2018-06-30 JoinedCanada
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Daoist_ye_feng1yrCommented25 years old
Lifespan limit: 80 (55 years left)- Daoist_ye_feng2yrCommented
really? you're standard is so low bro
Luke hung up the call from the White House and silently thought, 'If it was the 45'th President's daughter they were talking about, I might have been tempted. After all, everyone has a 'patriotic' heart." - Daoist_ye_feng2yrCommentedCh 446 Challengers and Defenders
- Daoist_ye_feng3yrCommented
he could use sharigan in the age 10? is genta a genius too?
" Minato , use earth release - great eruption jutsu on the ground here ! Genta , when big brother is forced out from underground quickly cast your best sharingan jutsu on him immediately before him noticing ! " - Daoist_ye_feng3yrPosted
Great story and writing man, it is really interesting. reincarnation novels are really common and hard to make interesting. just some helpful criticism is that try to have more paragraph blocks in your writing because the structure of your writing is really hard to read. just imagine reading this comment without any space. and yes I've not capitalized my letters of my words in the beginning of the sentence (so what sue me I'm not the one whose writing the story).
- Daoist_ye_feng3yrCommentedCh 1 Reincarnation/Basketball Camp
- Daoist_ye_feng3yrCommented
hahaha... Corona took our mc away
Seems like corona virus finally took my life huh, damn i still had so much to achieve and most of all i still wanted to play more basketball but seems like thats all i get.