CallmeGo

or its equivalent

shit aka the doujinshi plots

not really an epilogue more like a few sentences about how they changed and the events after and if they didnt change maybe 10 or so chapters after the situation got even worse that causes the protag to have a life and death situation which cpuld lead to some character development too

From a reader perspective, the story itself is good 5/5 but in the Christian context it is missing one of the most crucial parts which is salvation for the people for even if the protagonist exorcisises the evil spirits even more will come back in the future as mentioned in Matthew 12. So I feel that though you are doing a good job I would really urge you to add the perspective of the people and their journey into Christ and the effects if they didn't.

because this is most likely a chinese fanfic that the translator decided to turn the mc into filipino and other related characters

from 12 am to 12 am for 7 days a week I think since 996 means from 9 am to 9 pm 6 days a week

Doesn't seem quite practical compared to genjutsu since you still have to overpower the opponent's chakra network to bloodbend them. Maybe you could try to make something like Hidan to make the concept work

So far it's alot better now the only problems left are the weird spaces within paragraphs and periods aside from that it's readable

my only real problem with this story is that please use any grammar application. My eyes hurt after reading the first chapter.