ulu, this was so nice..

boooold, first chapter is well executed, author picked a very difficult setting here. in this chapter allready there are 1-2 things worth discussing, but let's see how it goes. just hope there won't be to mutch vague stuff happening cuz of the difficulty

this ain't bad :3

no clue why those op flyers are at lvl 3 private.. they also got low talent ? with a rank 9 beast on their shoulders? and money?

mm.. I like that MC picked his bird, and that he is sorta a side char.. but u said, he was the best of his school, he could have gotten a powerfull beast, where is his intellect, where is anything. Hope he fking dies like a side character...

I,m a bit confused... why are the monsters way stronger? and the humans are way way stronger than these op monsters. cuz of money? sorta weird that he picked the most hardworking path, which has the biggest shortcuts using money. sounds like the most frustrating method to get stronger...

uhm... he started his adventure like.. 1,5 -2 months ago right? how can these people be younger and 10x stronger, tougher, isn't soulbinding at the age 16 standard? how can they be younger than him...

hmm.. read around 90 chaps, author seems green but also seems to have potential, novel is a good read overall. grammar fixes and some better executions/ explanation would make it a great book.