parsaj
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parsaj2 months agoCommentedI would suggest selecting past or present and sticking with it. changing tenses can come off as off-putting.
- parsaj3 months agoCommented
Called it!
- parsaj3 months agoCommented
Oh, god I can feel the future RIGHTOUSNESS coming from here!
- parsaj8 months agoCommented
honestly, I kept reading this story for the first sixyish chapters, where it was mainly action. But this has turned into a drama/mystery fest that just drags on and on, and well that's not my thing.
- parsaja year agoCommented
- parsaja year agoCommented
Get that Dawn booty!
- parsaj2 years agoCommented
Was he ever truly selfish before?
- parsaj2 years agoCommented
I like it more in the past tense, probably because I'm used to reading it that way and present tense feels awkward somehow.
- parsaj2 years agoReplied to Fallen_saint
Try sir lucifer morningstar's and Dark Wolf shiro's works on fanfiction, some of them are quite good.