Gerry_Marvin

remove repeated chapter

I don't know how to explain it but the characters feel fake and the dialog is very stilted. This story feels like it's am being told about the scene, instead of being in the scene. weird.

Through the first 14 chapters, this is a great sports story told through the eyes of the protagonist. The writting is adult, and the characters are well written.

premise hurts my brain. MC can't play football presumably due to either heart or lung issues and needs to reduce physical activity. then he starts Badminton. insane. Chapters very short and reads as a recall exercise instead of a story.

I wanted to like it a lot. Unfortunately, it's very repetitive and introduces fake problems to immediately solve them with no stakes. this happens every chapter and quickly wears out its welcome. Good premise, poor excecution.

good shop system story. terrible ending, very rushed.

As of chapter 30, the world makes sense, and the characters are good. There are no huge discrepancies with reality. Good sports coaching story. Translation is competent.

No harem. MC actively avoids one and is committed to one person.

this story is fine chapter by chapter, but there are inconsistancies so large it hurt the brain to read it. the prose is well written but the main character has no personality. overall I liked it but very flawed.

what is all the "he has played 0 first team minutes stuff"??? I feel like my brain is under attack.