ValktyrBlack

Do it on qq

When you make your character too OP and need drama to pad the story. Just add world jumping/travel if you have no idea where to take this story. Valka is infuriating. Like she didn't do horrible things. Where did this sudden sympathy come from?

bro post on other sites. Never know when webnovel will have a power trip and do a purge

I don't get the sudden pity for little girls when the whole novel has been about him being a king and making hard decisions. Why the sudden shift for people he doesn't even know. He knew what kind of place the world is and westeros is but is now being like 'oh the world id so unjust'. No shit.

Bro.... This level of euphemism is unknown and unfathomable

Just binged this. Loved it and the language is also good except some confusion between she and he in dialogue. I think the kingdom is too dependent on him. It makes sense but I would think there would be some attempt in understanding the stuff he builds like levers and stuff. If it gets broken then they have to get the king to fix it. The kingdom without his daily direction would fall. He should at least make the kingdom semi dependent so to enjoy life. He needs to build more cities and develop the surrounding areas as to not put all his eggs in one basket. Is there a harem? I like Valka as well. Would like to see more reactions to his actions or the ripples he causes. The buildup to wars is also quite logical.

This is unironically the best fic I have read in a long time. That too on this website. This has the best scumbag to slowing redeeming arcs I have ever seen. I don't this I have any big faults with this fic. After New York it picks up like crazy and I love both pre NY and post NY arcs. Lewds are absolutely amazing. Anyone who says that they hate the MC, is correct but they have not given him time to develop. Also he is not that strong despite what you might see in the status. But he is believable strong. I also like his relationships with the lovers. Each have a good arc. My fav is Agatha. I have also felt for him due to his past. The best and most realistic backstory as to why he is how he is. And the backstory chaps were well written so no skipping through. I love this fic point blank and I shall read it daily. Author is crazy talented for writing this stuff and I implore you to post on other sites like QQ. I cannot praise this enough. I even wrote a review after such a long time.

Luring children with promises...

Gaddam. That was sad af. But beautiful

lol