Alphasuzy
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Alphasuzy2mthCommentedHey man, legit just came across this book and it’s not great grammar wise or flow. I’d think it might be better to start over cuz it’s been a long time and you probably have improved by this point. I skimmed thru your book and honestly I think you could do better. Not hating on you just kinda telling it how it is. Regardless, do whatever makes you comfortable.
Ch 33 I'm back- Alphasuzy2mthCommentedTesla Orphanage.
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He uploaded, a Christmas miracle come true…
Haven't thought about that. Probably just find a way for that as well - Alphasuzy4mthCommented
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Option 1 - Only Riveria! - Alphasuzy5mthCommentedHe might still be ali-
- Alphasuzy6mthReplied to Kono_Dio_na"Amen."
- Alphasuzy8mthCommentedBecause I started to trick him since I was 4 or 5 years old!
- Alphasuzy8mthCommentedHowever, Itachi's attitude was very firm. "This matter has nothing to do with anything else. I am indebted to Hiruzen-sama's kindness, but I really do not have the intention to enter Anbu."
- Alphasuzy8mthCommentedChapter 43: The Storm
- Alphasuzy9mthCommented"...I know that you don't mean to, but that is very discouraging for my resolve." said Noelle with a deadpan look on her face.
- Alphasuzy9mthCommented<Dark Lord's Special Move- Extase- Space Cutter>
- Alphasuzy9mthCommented"You should have gone for the head," said Sekke with a smirk as his body soon started to gain color and totally naked Dark Lord stood in front of a group of surprised and scared elves.
- Alphasuzy10mthCommented"You guys have eyes but cannot see Mt. Tai?" asked Sekke.
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This book has been deleted. - Alphasuzy10mthCommentedKlaus, Yuno, Hamon- Group 4
- Alphasuzy10mthCommented"Sekke, Anna, Mimosa you three will be working together," said Mereoleona.
- Alphasuzy10mthCommented"God Of Delusion and Denseness?" asked Vritra.
- Alphasuzy11mthCommented"No....seriously....just focus.....can't.....you all hear.......the boss music?!" asked Sekke with his eyes closed as a smirk appeared on his face and strong mana immediately filled the surroundings.
- Alphasuzy11mthCommented'...He is learning as he is fighting?... What kind of ridiculous host did I get this time?' thought Vritra.
- Alphasuzy11mthCommented'How can 'it' be that big?' thought Marx feeling a bit inferior.