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bad grammar and flow of the story

amazing grammar and more realistic storytelling compared to most other GOT fanfictions

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are you going to correct that tho? author-sama

Great story.

Great start. Love the story. You wouldn't believe how many stories have them cultivating or something like that in a show where there is no need for it. Live the fact that he's just a regular guy in a regular world. Nothing weird or anything like that. Great writing.

the mc is more realistic and knows how to take advantage of situations. İ liked how the story is progressing i hope you will not drop it good luck author

Interesting

Although there are few chapters as of now, it seems like an interesting story based on WMW! You also plan on making it very different from canon, for which I am grateful :)

he reincarnates in hp world with wasted wishes, then he spends 10-15 years in time dilation learning magic and other skills, at 11 he enters the hogwarts express, in the next chapter he reincarnates as niklaus mikaelson in vampire diaries. what happened here? well, your guess is as good as mine. i dropped this waste of time at this point