where is this books chapter in comparison to ff. I read your entire upload there but the names are different and this seems a few behind.

where is this book in comparison to the ff.com version?

"little bit" instead of "little but"

l.m,. m. .m... m m..........lp...l..

Frankly, I am blown away. No large grammar errors. Decent job showing the characters future potential without a cheesy flash forward that others use. Smart idea used to limit the character and allow for proper growth.

I was truly blown away by this story and read up to chapter 660 within 4 days in a binge session. The storyline, background, and magic development are all great. There are the occasional issue with grammar, however that may just be the differences due to translations. The only large issue that I noticed (which tends to happen in some of these larger novels) is that some things get dropped by the wayside and forgotten (such as his magical pet).