I wish the was an additional chapter after this one, and another one after I just finished reading the addition chapter and hope it went on until I was satisfied. But I really don’t know if I will ever be satisfied. This is a great story am really enjoying it. Keep on writing and providing us with such good stories.

I enjoyed your version of the Harry Potter story, and if you feel like you need a break that’s ok. I had a great time reading your story. And hope you will continue writing stories in the future.

9

To antagonize an ally is a weird thing for the MC. I thought he was clever and mature. To me, in this chapter he acted childish and was basically the same as his step-brother (idiots)