after months i finally came back to this to read what 8 or 9 chapters and this i the Cliff i face...

trhuth be told its more a he then a her

wasnt whitebeard the strongest devil fruit?

I do apologise dear Sir or Madam, I will continue to write with all the errors still.As for my excusesnot my first langwriting from mobilespell check set to non englishspell check works weird when set to multiple languagestoo lazy to change spellcheck language every timemost of the time when writing esseys i hurry to finish and don't focus on correct grammarso there you have it

actually it only makes sense for mc, since he is human in mind, and thats what human idea for a dragon name is, it is still cringe since dragons themselves dont really have a need for a name, from a societal point of view they dont encounter enough crowds to need a name to know who is who, they also dont need the name to be mighty or prestigious becouse they dont need to remind themselves or tell themselves that they are in fact mighty they just are, and they have no need to interact with other species for anything so they dont need to introduce thselves just "THE dragon" is enough for mortals, as for "true" name magical natural or otherwise it should have been discovered not mc just choosing

sooo this is the one punch man world before the powers?

sure he had difficulties pressing buttons with the same skills

"idle energy gathering"

i cant comprehand either, how does his possesion work, how can he loose mass but not gain, then how can the water hold him when he is 1000 times more energy then the water needs to evaporate?

why does this seem like someone not knowing german pretending to speak german

well its interesting nut mc stupidity makes me want to drop it

didnt unlock movement yet so can move from water to air lol

ha i knew it energy does not exist by itself for itself.Wow then mc is a fake existance "i think therefore i am?" Needing mass is actually very generous becouse everything has mass:water, air, the void of space too has mass becouse there is stuff in space, even just protons neutrons AND ELECTRONSActually mass is similarly to energy just a descriptor telling us how does the "thing" behave in regards to the curvature of spacetime

to start with heavy use of suspention of disbelief is requaired to read this novel, becouse the energy itself does not exist in reality its just a way to describe the state of a physical phenomenon, i.e water has temperature (heat) how much? some amount of degrees but what can it do with that temperature we explain in energy(it can heat up a certain mass to a certain amount of degrees in temperature using x jules of energy),energy is a helper in comparing and computing the state of something but "just energy" without mass, movement, heat, radioactivity.... there is no "energy" at least not in reality, this novel at least until this point is using real world physical phenomenoms like heat exchange so i will assume for now that mc in fact has some sort of physical representative an avatar holding that energy, if he was energy and when he woke he was 1 energy then collected another so what then there is 2 mc? how can he get more of himself from outside of himself.If he has a body the yes water evaporating from his surface will steal some heat from him

WAM!

thats fun but it gets old

please stop using this word

i dont remember either but it felt that way and its a joke anyway[img=recommend]

i don't remember the timeline but for the sake of comedy let's say i'm close enough; these people holding so much respect and awe for the all powerful dragon when in reality " i killed a couple ships worth of people when i was 5, by 10 years old i butchered a whole kingdom, my name is Aether i'm 18 years old and im telling kings queens and wize 70year old geezers that they stupid an my way is waay smarterer ;p"

I just finished binge reading this, the idea of a being of the warp is interresting and i would read it just for that, still the quality makes it hard to understand, sometimes the choice of words feel wrong. I would like some more detail in some parts for example in last chapter i'd like a little more explanation on the "last hit" becouse at this moment i'm not sure if the ctan was wounded just from the material power of the hammer as in was hit very hard or from some kind of firy explosion and the fire itself was a bonun or just from friction or maybe the fire was more like burning the soul, another example from earlier chapter when Mc was getting ready to save Isha did he check if he had the time or did he just assume...? Also Mc keeps acting differently like in his realm he acts like a medieval lord but when in battle he shouts like a teen would, if this change of character is intentional i feel like at least some inner monologue explaining his train of thought would be nice. Anyway this is becoming too long, I like it, I want more, Sir or Madam Author Please let me know if more critique is welcome