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Javlin2

Javlin2

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Avid reader, might try writing in future

2018-06-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin28mth
    Replied to BreathlessWriter

    I think the only way is it create a new story under fanfic section and then copy and paste your story over.

    Ch 1 Farewell Forks
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin28mth
    Commented

    liking the story so far its got lots of potential. Though you should more it from novel to fanfiction section so more people will see it.

    Ch 1 Farewell Forks
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin21yr
    Commented

    Other than the room of requirement I dont see many other reasons to go. But if he still has his incubis abilities then going to beauxbatons where some veela attend could be amusing.

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  • Javlin2
    Javlin21yr
    Commented

    I like the story so far but why are you following cannon so much?

    Ch 12 New Moon
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    Twilight of Steel
    Movies ยท Authorwolker
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin21yr
    Commented

    I,m really enjoying this story so far and cant wait to see where it goes. Thanks author

    Ch 4 Neo, meet Neopolitan
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    RWBY Multiversal Chatroom System
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin21yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 3 The Arc
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    RWBY Multiversal Chatroom System
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin22yr
    Commented

    That size is just stupid, not only will it hurt the girl you would be lucky to ever fit it all in her let alone ever receiving a decent bj. There is no logical reason to go over 11 inchs and even that is pushing it for alot of girls to enjoy.

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    The lucky reincarnator in Harry Potter
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin22yr
    Commented

    This just seems to be the authors way of dragging out the story, because no sain person reincarnated in a world they know is dangerous would screw around so much, and using a mothers love as an excuse is total bs because if he wants to keep her safe he needs to be op.

    The method he knew that could increase his strength included the use of weight which his mother definition wouldn't even think of allowing him to touch.
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    RWBY: Remnantโ€™s Outsider
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin22yr
    Commented

    I dont know what this says and not sure why people keep using it, all i see are squares

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  • Javlin2
    Javlin22yr
    Commented

    Most people myself included Don't read a story so we can spend half our time translating what should be easily read and at the moment without doing that half the story doesn't make sense.

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    Might & Pride (Harry Potter)
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin22yr
    Commented

    The story had a lot of potential, But the way you are destroying the AOE You might have not as well even put it in there.

    Ch 1 Chapter 6
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    Harry Potter : Arc of Embodiment ( Rewrite )
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin22yr
    Commented

    The black suit with way better, This new one just sounds ......... I don't even have the words.

    This leads me to where I am now. Placed on a mannequin in front of me is my new suit. Carbon fiber weaved spandex. Very flexible and somewhat durable. A dark blue suit with white highlights. The white goes down the side of the arms and legs and meets in the middle of the chest, creating the iconic S symbol. I made a white half-mask over my eyes and a blue head covering my hair and back towards my neck, almost like a reverse Subzero's mask. The eyelids are uncovered, showing my deep blue eyes.
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    Marvels SuperMutant
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin22yr
    Replied to WeedGodking

    Hopefully the author kills him off, Too many other stories leave him alive for petty reasons that dont add anything to the plot.

    Ch 6 Chapter 6
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    Overpowered Anime System in ATG
    Anime & Comics ยท Salutati0ns
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin22yr
    Commented

    Great story so far and thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 3 Spartan
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    Quarian Effect SI (Mass Effect)
    Video Games ยท Nisiris
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin23yr
    Commented

    Death scythes like darksiders 2 would be cool.

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    (Is being rewritten in another novel.)
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin23yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter and great story so far.

    Ch 56 Chapter 54 Time with Sona before the match
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    Being overpowered is boring in another world
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin23yr
    Commented

    Another great chapter, cant wait to read more

    Ch 12 Chapter 12
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    I Reincarnated In Twilight
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  • Javlin2
    Javlin23yr
    Commented

    enjoying the story so far except for the fact that you keep referring to all the females as males and the chapters are too small. But other than that it's a good story so far.

    Ch 18 Chapter 17
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    ATG: Primitive Chaos Dragon Emperor
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