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This will backfire.

Omega level mutants and the whole hellfire club group are crazy enough on their own.

Balance is key. Too many heavy branches without deep roots will lead a weak tree to fall in the wind.

They were already a very powerful family who controlled the police force in canon. They could get away with taking out an orphan if he offended them.

A compelling and consistent narrative. The worldbuilding is this story's strength. Expansion on the universe of A song of Ice and fire creates I look patiently forward to it's conclusion.

Charisma is nearly a superpower. If anyone loyal to you posses it they must tolerated unless they are actively undermining you.

I'm glad he's not the type to take revenge on the kid brother.

A solid concept wasted on a boring villain with none of Yujiro's compelling qualities. If puppy kicking villains who steal candy from babies are your deal this is for you. If you ever wondered why the bigger guys doesn't just eat the smaller guys in his way you may enjoy this novel. Solid execution of a concept I personally find distasteful.

Hawaiian pizza is amazing when done correctly.

You chosing asthetics first is disappointing. Everyone chooses the swimmers build. None of them are true Hanmas at heart. Strength is the primary concern of a Hanma.