This was a wonderful novel. Congratulations on completing it. While I’m not sure this will read, what were you planing with the half celestial bloodline, some characters made a few remarks about it but nothing ever came of it? Seemed like there was an entire group of people waiting for raven or something

Happy thanksgiving

He’s really getting in the habit of passing out

Well...that was a quick turn around. show potential resources and he’s all in

You’re a wizard raven

Umm was raven even on this plane then?

A bit unexpected, hopefully there’s a good reason why people are randomly aggressive to raven.

Well...didn’t exactly specify the type of fight, well done author. The end was very amusing

Merry Christmas!

Merry Christmas zero_things!

In regards to these worlds, are we talking Space travel here. Traveling planet to planet or is this just a naming thing for a part of one very large planet?

Huh, Well that solves quite a few problems many eastern fantasy novel main characters run into. Wonder what direction the author will take for raven.

Now I hope that after ascension luna and the others don’t become damsel in distress’s just for plot conveinance. just creates baggage for the main character and useless side characters as a long term result.

Huh, wonder If his cracked core will have long term repercussions or if beast warriors have a way to heal.

400 is a good number to complete a story without unnecessary fluff. Of course I’ll do what I can to support when I can. In regards to voting, are you familiar with the goal Method to gain popularity? The author sets voting number goals to provide an extra chapter. It gives the audience a sense of accomplishment and wanting more while drawing in a larger audience from being higher ranked.

Interesting, I’m rather impressed on how you handled the potential revenge from superior. Glad to see an author not have brain dead side characters attacking Regardless of consequence but punishing the initial transgressor instead. For the next bit, the girlfriend. although currently powerless its good to have a proactive side character which has potential to be a strong supporting character. Be cautious though, a mis step can derail the overall plot development. However, given your writing so far im rather confident this won’t be an issue for you. If I may ask, do you intend to make this a long story with many chapters, or something shorter but complete?

Hm, I hope the girlfriend doesn’t end up becoming baggage to the main character. Seen to many novels fall apart due to constant concern for a significant other. I enjoy everything you have done so far, keep up the good work.

Just a word of caution, be careful of repetitive information. If the reader understands the situation there isn’t a need to rephrase it. Understandably not all chapters can be perfect. However overall your quality has improved lately, Good job with that, not many authors can Improve this quickly.

Um so did raven stumble upon death law? The whole portal deal I can see with his prior experience with Space and time. however this was a bit of a stretch. Although it was an Appropriate punishment.

And the only person with some reasoning and intelligence was the person who opposed the plan