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  • oolala
    oolala2mth
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    i wish that the author would differentiate where to put the dialogue, the action and the description of the story because when it all gather in one while paragraph, i kinda get confused. The plot is steady, but will this be another OP mc or the mc that train step by step to become stronger?

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    Uncanny Soul: The Awaken One
    Fantasy · DearyJian
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  • oolala
    oolala2mth
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    10x time faster? bigger?

    Lisa gathers up with Thora and Eileen. These three always meet together in the training field. They are like three musketeers and also best friends. Eileen and Thora also discover up their ability. “ Hey, Lisa… Thora got new ability you know…” Eileen first comment. Lisa surprised happier. “ Wow, really? What is it?” she curious. Everyone got more than one ability depends on the soul. “ So, this happened when I got to practice with Trixx. Suddenly I got a vision of her behind her back and she’s got a weapon hidden. So, my new ability was I could see through an object 10X than usual eyes.” She said. “ Woah! That’s cool Thora…” The two girls listened and grateful for her.
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    Uncanny Soul: The Awaken One
    Fantasy · DearyJian
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