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Hey! Thanks so much for the amazing support! I’m thrilled you enjoyed the first chapter! Making the first chapter "The End" was a little ironic twist I just had to go for. I work hard to keep the story flowing smoothly from chapter to chapter, no pesky plot holes, so it’s incredibly encouraging to hear you vibe with the style. Can’t wait to get your thoughts on what’s next!

🌟 Shameless Author Here, Reviewing My Own Novel! 🌟 Yes, it's me—the unrepentant, sleep-deprived, plot-twisting maniac behind this story—here to tell you that this webnovel is an absolute masterpiece. Biased? Absolutely. But hear me out. Do you enjoy tragic backstories, cruel worlds, and MCs who rise from the dirt (sometimes literally) just to get smacked down again by fate? Then wow, have I got the emotional rollercoaster for you. This isn’t just a cultivation novel—it’s a descent into madness, hope, growth, and the bittersweet taste of victory (or maybe blood, depending on the chapter).ook, if you’ve ever wanted to yell “JUST GIVE THE BOY A BREAK!” at your screen, this is the book for you. If not… you probably will anyway. 10/10 would write again. In fact, I am writing it again. Right now. Please send snacks and emotional support. Sincerely, 🖊️ The Shameless Author

Thank you for the support!

You’re off to an amazing start—your plot is engaging, and your passion really shines through in your writing! To help your story flow even more smoothly, if you haven’t already, I’d suggest trying a storyboard. Laying out your major plot points and filling in smaller connecting events can make your narrative even more immersive and easier for readers to follow. You clearly have the talent and creativity to build something truly special, and I’m genuinely excited to see how your storytelling evolves. Keep going—you’ve got something great here, and I can’t wait to see more of the world you’re bringing to life!😇

Thanks for the support!! I will try to keep updates regular and improve as time goes on!!! 🤩

Okay I never leav reviews, but for this LN I made an exception. It has so much promise IF ONLY the author/ translator would get a good editor, who kept Track of the fucking power system!! I’m a first time reader and I feel I under stand it better!! Second the MC is a Harem protagonist that can’t seem to have a conversation with the love interest, he just make sublet glances at them and they get weak in the knees?? The interpersonal relationships and world building is trash, but the power system and world ( if properly developed and described) is the bases for a perfect LN I feel could match other greats!!! TLDR: Great concept, PLEASE GET AN EDITOR/PROOFREADER, rewrite with more character development and world building, and you have an actual 5star novel.