So is the personality change going to be permanent or is it going to smooth out a little over time?

A pity. Do you post this anywhere else or just on WN?

This was hilarious, well done author.

Rin is best girl. Though she maybe arrogant and a little petty, she is still best girl hands down.

So the GAR goes nowhere near Egypt then? Seems a little odd that a nation like Egot doesn’t get a mention…

So I assume you have some sort of plan to cure Magnus’ infertility? Or is it just Magnus assuming he is infeerily due to what Merlin and Arthur assume?

This chapter was so confusing with you describing Ajuka as male and female at differeby times

You still need to watch your pronouns, you’re consistently mixing up he/she and him/his/her/hers. You should look I to getting an editor or beta reader who has a good grasp of the English language to help

As a note, with Scathach, you keep using make pronouns, despite being female.

Sorry, but Sev is an idiot in this case. Who is the one person ye can turn to to help him? Magnus. And yet, he doesnt bother with asking for help and just goe….

You kept mentioning Stan when the conductor was Kevin

That was a well deserved beat down. Nice job Mikoto.

Dont forget about child carers, they have to do what the parents Or ally would

I think you need to tone down Magnus’ arrogance a fair bit

Somehow i just knew he had murdered his wife and daughters...

Sunny Day boosted STAB overheat... holy **** thats gonna be broken...

The argument amused me to no end.

Y’know, many authors complain about their characters getting away from them, but this takes the cake!