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Rin is best girl. Though she maybe arrogant and a little petty, she is still best girl hands down.
This chapter was so confusing with you describing Ajuka as male and female at differeby times
You still need to watch your pronouns, you’re consistently mixing up he/she and him/his/her/hers. You should look I to getting an editor or beta reader who has a good grasp of the English language to help
As a note, with Scathach, you keep using make pronouns, despite being female.