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Knightm4re

Knightm4re

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Is it possible to ask for unlimited wishes or a wishing wand to a Genie who offer you three wishes?I mean he/she did say "Anything you wish is my command".

2018-06-22 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Knightm4re
    Knightm4re3yr
    Replied to GenXPrays

    Thanks for the review. The thing is, the main character knows the regret because it's always on his mind. So it's mostly about how he is going to change his destiny when he has been given a second chance to fix that mistake. [img=recommend]

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    To you, my regret (WIP MANY CHANGES)
    Realistic · Knightm4re
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  • Knightm4re
    Knightm4re3yr
    Posted

    The writing system is unique, but it isn't a traditional nor conventional system. So I had a hard time understanding who was speaking. And some unique choice of words. Overall the story is fantastic, the only downside is the writing. Keep up the good work [img=update][img=coins]

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    Ideas for DayDreaming
    Urban · GenXPrays
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  • Knightm4re
    Knightm4re3yr
    Posted

    haha a shameless review by author. It's imperfect, nothing is only perfect when we perfect it a long filler, so I can actually post it here's a quote: Cake is better than flowers a japanese quote meaning that something that has use and is done is better than looks (or something like that)

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    To you, my regret (WIP MANY CHANGES)
    Realistic · Knightm4re
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  • Knightm4re
    Knightm4re3yr
    Posted

    This is pretty nice, I like the writing system because I can actually differentiate who's talking. But honestly I don't really know where the story is taking me, yet (probably in future chapters).

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    汉语
    Anime & Comics · Zerga3
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  • Knightm4re
    Knightm4re3yr
    Posted

    I can see a lot of references you get from reading other books. It's pretty neat but the pacing is really fast unless that is your goal. I personally don't like the writing quality, I get confused sometimes. But it is readable.[img=recommend][img=coins]

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    The Goblin's Leveling System!
    Fantasy · ShadowKatake
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