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I am who I am. *A dark God*
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omic8dCommented"What the fuck!" I screamed in a panic. But the voice I heard coming out from my mouth was not uttering human speech. But I was⌠meowing.- omic16dCommented
thanks for the chapter the dude definitely deserves to chill although i would have prefered him chilling with kara.please don't make him have amnesia through the birth. i hated the comic for pulling the time travel bit and making him lose 5 yrs with his daughter. atleast let him be there for the birth of his child
(AN: I did say that I'm gonna be slowing things down a bit, it seems like Mark has been going non stop since the start of he novel. So I'm gonna take my time to build this arc up. There is a reason for his Amneisa and yes it's linked to the necklace, I'm sure those of you with a good memory can remember where the necklace was previously. How it got around Marks neck won't be revealed for now. Hope you enjoyed the chapter.) - omic16dCommented
of course it's harley lol
*Does this vibrator suit me Marky?* - omic16dCommented
ok i rly needed this thnk u for answering all the questions i had from last chap real quick
John and Amelia Evans, the people who had found him practically dead in a forest close to their hunting lodge. They took him back to the lodge expecting him to die before they could ever get him to a hospital, but to their surprise, Mark seemed to get better every passing day. They decided to care for him as best they could, feed him and give him food; they assumed he was a metahuman or some kind with a healing ability, and that he was unfortunate enough to encounter one of the many bears in this part of Canada. Based on how injured John had said he was Mark wasn't sure how he was alive now, but it seemed he must have some sort of healing factor if he was. He just wished he could remember more than his own name. - omic16dCommented
ight just reread this and the fact that mark somehow survived getting his heart crushed still has me stumped I but hey vultrimites r hardy so i roll with it. hope next chap explains y people seem to think he's dead or does he have amnesia?
(AN: That's the end of the Arc. Now I'm gonna explain the logic I created from what's explained about Viltrumite biology. So Viltrumites can hold their breathe for long periods of time, so I assume that their cells utilise oxygen and deliver it throughout the body more efficiently. The heart pumps blood through the body which sends oxygen, if the heart stops the body becomes oxygen deprived and all your organs shut down. Anyway I think based on their biology that a Viltrumite will be able to survive without a heart for a lot longer than a human. It's shaky logic but it's what I'm using. Anyway hope you enjoyed the chapter and the arc, and I hope to see you for the Raven Arc.) - omic16dCommented
no worries man take your time we'll be waiting
<p>Alright I got a lot of questions of whether I'm going to continue the story.<br/>Now the reason why I didn't post any reason for disappearing before...well I was partially worried that when I say anything about what's happening, I might not return to finish it anymore...ugh i know... stupid...I'm pretty sure you might not even understand what I meant as I myself wasn't haha...ha... It was something along the lines of..."I didn't post a reason because I'll be back soon..." I told myself, But the "soon" turned out way too long I guess...<br/><br/>As for whether I'll continue the story... honestly...I hope I will...<br/>The problem is that between my academic stuff and home situation I just couldn't find the time, motivation nor the right mental state to write anything altogether.<br/>I even tried to start a new story a few times. And it's annoying because I have a bunch of awesome ideas I had over time that I started but so far only made like two, maybe five chapters of each before stopping again. <br/>I don't know when I'll be back to writing but I assure you that I'm still alive so the chance always exists that one day I'll wake up and think..."Damn... that's an awesome idea! I need to write that down!"<br/>In the meantime I hope you have had a great new year and don't forget me haha. As Arnold once said. "I'll be back" đ</p> - omic18dCommented
agreed
This paragraph has been deleted. - omic21dReplied to Dummydumdum1Ch 14 Chapter 14: Paradise (New)
- omic22dCommented'All according to plan.'
- omic23dCommented
Supergirl
- Other suggestions.. - omic23dCommented
Supergirl
3. Love Interest - omic23dCommented
no
- A domain where it puts enemy in a constant state of hunger but nothing to eat so they end up eating themselves - omic23dCommented
yes
- [Infinity Cleave] or I[Infinity Railgun] *again still undecided* (can function like this compressing infinity into a blade like weapon - shooting it out to infinitely cut into a regenerative figure stopping them from regrowing a limb or something else - or compressing it into a quick clean rail shot infinitely penetrating into an organ not allowing regeneration - omic27dCommented
both
Poll: Are you here for MCxHuman or MCxPokemon content? - omic27dCommented"And with you too, of course." I lied. It's just Buneary who has a villainous aura. Salandit is more like an alley rapist. Evil, sure, but not villainous.
- omic29dCommented
ok yea this is pretty much what bringing up a vs match with dc fans is like
SuperManISGOAT07: ["Those Who which to harm earth, you will have to face me" Yeah this guy is pretty whack, he's cringe energy is insane, I bet superman can one shot him] - omic1mthReplied to BenisBoy14Poll: Are you here for MCxHuman or MCxPokemon content?
- omic1mthCommented
+1
A) Focus on and show Aldrif's growth and connection with her mom, teachers, the MC, and more in the soon to come chapters. Basically, have her own little arc, which will definitely include the MC unlike this previous and much longer than necessary sacrifice arc. Like this you will also be able to see her growth and change over time, to go from a bratty/shy child to a calm, composed, serious/comical huntress.