Raizen22

Took a chance in this story and it does not disappoint. Definitely an interesting idea and I love the concept and idea. Definitely a story I will be on the look out for!

Found this story by chance and I really love the choice for mc. The decisions he has made, the growing and planning be has put into place thanks to his future knowledge. Along with the plan he enacted this chapter, very well done! I especially love his thoughts on his abilities, theory on cursed energy. An how its different compared to how sorcerers and curses use it. Saving Junpei was icing on the cake for me, cannot wait to see more.

This guy is a bloody idiot. The bug is quite similar to the one that Greed had to deal with in overgeared. An as far as I remember, he was smart enough to not let the company know. Smh. I'll give it a few more chapters even though quite a few things about this story annoys me. Because I know the effort and time out in to craft a story was alot, and I don't want to blast your work. Because of something I strongly dislike. But I can see how this 'bug' can help with his growth, provided he is not stupid enough to just do an all agility build for a character that needs strength to do well.

Really enjoyed this chapter and I am okay with mc getting the egg. Other people would whine and cry oh your messing up canon. But that is the point of fanfic, even more so if you have an self insert of any sort. He's using his advanced knowledge to get ahead and try cut off certain threats for the future. All the while advancing towards his goals, which is awesome. An shows me he is not only goal oriented but he keeps his eyes on the prize. Not to mention he is blunt and honest with himself. Rather than someone who deludes themselves and spends 2 or 3 chapters whining that oh they are in a death world and blah blah blah. I honestly tend to see that with alot of SI fics and it's sickening. I am fine with seeing an SI cope with being in their favorite/u favorite world, and doing what needs to be done to secure means to better their lives. As long as I see them not only do the work, but not be afraid to interact with canon/non canon characters. Then I am okay with it, despite others being butt hurt about it. Not many atla fanfics, especially so fics are this good, or are willing to befriend Azula or Ty lee without being so....mechanical. This story does not feel mechanical but organic and I like how Ty lee is benefiting along with Zan, and how his presence affects the world he is in. Thanks to his presence. As any SI/character not native to the world is supposed to do. Canon is simply guidelines to follow, it does not mean he has to follow it all to the letter. As long as I get an interesting story at the end of the day, I am satisfied. Thank you author for the time and effort out into your story, it is appreciated and I look forward to more updates. Can't wait for Zan to learn the true art of firebending, definitely one of my favorite part of the series.

Enjoyed the little look into Azula's mind and chapter dedicated to her. I was wondering when this story would be updated and you did not disappoint. It was pretty cool to see her come to her logical conclusions and realizing that the very thing she loves. Her pride was what drove Zan away into the arms of another woman. Which for a prideful woman like Azula, stings heavily. I look forward to seeing her growth as a character and how it changes the story. Keep up the good work!

Ahh I see what she is trying to say. Creatures like Elves are evil by nature, the way a carnivore by nature has to eat meat. Is what Adalia is trying to say, but mc being blockhead and letting emotions cloud his judgment is not seeing the connection for himself. Basically the elf, vampire and succubus are what they are because it is in their nature. No amount of justifying can ever possibly change that. I like Adelia's slow, yet constantly emphasising the point flew over his head. He really needs to get a clue. Good story so far though.

Not gonna lie, I was a bit concerned for mc and Ash. Deeply concerned, and worried. Yet I love the feeling, because to worried or anxious for w character is the mark of a good writer. No, not good. Great even. This is beautifully and painstakingly done and I wanna thank you for coming up with the idea. I look forward to reading more, because this is awesome. I am sure mc will face more troubles in the future, but I am glad that the guillotine over his head(debt) has been removed, now he can focus on his life. I feel that you as thr author

My only issue/gripe with the story is the fact that, stories like this that try to be different from the norm. Always point out that oh their system is not a cheat, and how their circumstance prevents them from pursuing a romantic relationship. I can't tell you how many times I see it, and how many times I am sick of seeing it. Different strokes for different folks. If you want to choose a different path or be different then fine, nothing wrong with that. But please just stick to the story and work on showing us how despite the differences, mc can still be great or can improve. Show us why should we care about him and his struggles in a new world and body. One with great benefits but also crippling weaknesses. I don't need to hear about not liking harems or different versions/takes on how people approach using reincarnation or systems in general. When its not even plot relevant to the narrative. But other than that I am willing to give your story a try. Its different and interesting to say the least. Looking forward to see if it gets better as the story goes on.

Look forward to things picking up in the future. Have a powerstone and keep up the good work.

Idk why I took so long to find, let alone read this but man. I love this idea, having Lee mind control the Nomi to steal its Hamon is sick! Kudos my friend, I really enjoy and respect that move. I forgot that such an action could even be done!