it's not that big of a deal. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. i gave a truthful review and even said if you are a person that liked harem, you would like the story. I have nothing against the story it's just not the type of story I enjoy. and I haven't spammed anything. this is my first time giving a review in a while for any fanfic. don't take it personally. if I cause any bad feelings, my bad, but it was a truthful review.

this story had promise in the beginning, but then the author decided there is no need for a story when you can just have lemons and random romance in the middle of know where. for people that like harem and just 18+ scenes, this is for you, I guess. Overall, if the story actually happens, then the fanfic might be good, but for now, it's just a person trying to live out there fantasy in writing. There's nothing wrong with that but it's not a story.

I just got to this chapter. Got to say the best coiling dragon fanfic I ever read. Hope the author posts another chapter soon. I really like how it's not just a power-hungry MC trying to get to the top power without anyone around him. Plus it helps that it's not a harem. Thanks author-san for all the chapters so far.

if you're going to make people pay then leave the site. the story seems good but no one should be paying for it. you don't even have any other story before this so everyone who has read the first 4 chapters won't care.

nice

this should not be a TVD fanfic. it's more of a guy banging girls. there is no story, and the world background is a bunch of supernatural shows put together so the MC can bang chicks from other shows. the MCs power is good if only he used it. But if you want to read about a guy banging girls from supernatural shows, then it's for you. if you're trying to read something with a store, then move on and look for something else.

yes

it was pretty good and didn't need to be super good cause it's still middle school.

When the arc is done we will cry.

I think its cause they would still age. vampire don't age after so it's fine for them but witches would still age but be immortal like the guy who uses the philosopher's stone. they would be skin and bones within 200 years.

it's not edgy people need to understand he is still a kid. A kid in all sense just cause he has a system does not make him different mentally. This is not a reincarnation story it's about a kid having this power from the start. plus he has been sheltered his whole life with not as much information given to him. This is not earth where information is easy to access. So I think you making him have problems like this is normal. And don't read too much into people saying stuff like why he has a problem, the people on this site have not read a good book/fanfic they just want harem and R-rated content.

Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi, Konoha's Light, Naruto: Gate Of All Dimensions(This one is a little op but still good till 80 chapters then he gets more op), these are coming out right now

this will never be the best spiderman fanfic on this site sorry. if there is no uncle ben then this can't be the best spiderman fanfic. No offence to the author but it's the truth.

Nah he doesn't understand their pain. The thing is tony will never understand the pain he caused other people because he still is a bad person but now he hides behind a suit of armour. He said he made weapons for the country but that weapon is still being used to kill people. so he knows that his weapon kills people but he doesn't care. That's a huge plothole where they tried to make a bad person seem good when he never was. Not you but the MCU in general.

thanks for the chapter. Could you tell us the site you got the novel from just in case?