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oh your right. different people different mind set. even if they know things like that happens, specially in world with magic, lords and slave. they will question everything that does not go their way. tnx for the replys. good luck with your novel. πππ
and that is what im pointing at. the stupidity of the mc. VR or not that is his reality now. i think you wrote the mc as a double standard person. when his fine and happy no question ask, but problems and danger this VR should not be like this. its a good idea and story by the way. πππ
i'm pointing at the fact, vr or not, npc or not, that is the mc's reality. death is death. its his only reality now. can he return to his past life, i think its not mentioned. so what ever the npc do that his reality. he should have accepted that fact long ago. the way you wrote this he even love his parents now.
there is a warning, death is true death. anyone with a brain will think its not a game when your life is on the line.
its your fault his late.π΄π΄π΄π΄π΄
if it is a girl, mouth to mouth. if boy just pour. πππ
then why is the girl chose to pass there. its like thats the only way. ππππ
one of the worst i have read. reader says its a copy paste story, so? the original is also like this? π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘
is trying killing your ally not evil enough? he left him to die.