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"Is there a need for me to tell you, boy? You should be glad that you are dying at the hands of someone like me." The masked man sneered.- Jadebeauty1yrCommented
The God of Food 👑😁 🥪
Although they said that, their faces looked as if they were saying, 'dream on, for us to listen to you'. However, Xie Lian was already very satisfied with that response. Thus, he clapped his hands and said, "Alright. Lastly, the third and most important point—if it is necessary to abandon something, then please, just throw me away. Don't ever throw away food." - Jadebeauty1yrCommented
They have bo respect for a God 😂
One had to admit that the official made the right decision. When His Majesty discovered that Ju Yang (Altogether Bright) had changed into Ju Yang (Tremendous Masculinity), he didn't say anything. Instead, he invited a whole flock of scholars, before vigorously thumbing through ancient books. After finding countless minor details to justify the reason for the change, they wrote many articles, doing their utmost best to prove that the original spelling was Ju Yang (Tremendous Masculinity) and that Ju Yang (Altogether Bright) had been the wrong way to write it. In short, one night after this event, the whole nation's Ju Yang (Altogether Bright) temples turned into Ju Yang (Tremendous Masculinity) temples. - Jadebeauty1yrReplied to BombadilCh 4 Discussion Between Three Fools In The Ju Yang Temple At Night
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For things to become like this, it was really unimaginable. It was to the extent that nowadays, if someone told the other that, "You gave birth to a son who is Xian Le's Crown Prince", that would be much more malicious than cursing out the other party's descendants. - Jadebeauty1yrCommented
What else? He had had his revenge
Who knew that after he was demoted again, he did not become a demon and quite sincerely adapted to his banished lifestyle. There were no problems at all, and the only problem was just he was really too earnest. - Jadebeauty1yrCommented
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What was even more vigorous was that right after he ascended, he charged into the Heavens to beat up and murder everyone in all four directions. Thus, the Crown Prince had only ascended for about the time it took to burn one incense stick before he was kicked down again. - Jadebeauty1yrCommented
wow that escalate quick 😳
Because I'm lying. I have a lot to fear. After all, I've been conning the PA since I was a little kid. In truth, I am much more powerful than anyone they would allow to exist. - Jadebeauty1yrCommented
pengawal gk guna, ini bntr lagi bapaknya dtg balas dendam, trus dikalahkan, trus kakeknya yg dtg, trus dikalahkan lagi, lalu kakek buyutnya dtg ya
Pemuda itu terpental karena pukulan dari Xiao Long dan mendarat di antara para prajurit yang mengawalnya. Mereka tercengang melihat Tuan Muda mereka terpental oleh pemuda asing itu. Meskipun Tuan Muda ini sangat sombong, dia adalah Kultivator muda yang berbakat di kota ini. Dia sudah mencapai Ranah Body Tempering tingkat 9 di usia 18 tahun. - Jadebeauty1yrCommented
sama ternyata 😂
Xiao Long tercengang melihat pemuda ini, dia adalah tipe orang yang selalu ingin dia temui, tokoh Tuan Muda kaya yang sombong dan menjengkelkan. Orang se-tipe ini sering dia jumpai di novel yang ia baca dan seringkali membuatnya emosi dan merasa jengkel. Sekarang dia sangat bahagia ketika melihat orang itu kini ada di depannya, bersiap untuk dihajar. - Jadebeauty1yrCommentedCh 1 Awal Mula ( Prolog )
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Yu Xuan was behind the dirty work, he was the one who made her slip into the - Jadebeauty2yrCommentedCh 1 Shi Nian
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Honestly, I have no complaints for this book. It has a captivating cover, intriguing synopsis, and a writing style that flows so naturally that I have a great time reading the book. The Author is really good with her words. She describes things well, not much but not too little, just enough for the readers to have a picture the situation the main character's in. Yes, there's some errors in the writing but it's quite subtle as I read through the chapters so fast :) Can't help it as your words flow so well that I don't have to stop and reread each sentences just to grasp its meaning, lol. So far, good job Author! Overall, it's quite a good read. The transmigration started a bit late but it's fine for me. The pacing is nice, a fast one but didn't seem rushed.
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elf?
She slowly opened her eyes, adjusting to the bright light prevalent in the unfamiliar room. To her shock, she saw a tall and slender figure rushing to her side. The creature was beautiful with pointy ears. - Jadebeauty2yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue
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Giving this book the 5 stars it deserves as I honestly have no complaints for this book. The Writing Quality is good, I mean, very very good. I really like how the Author writes. Descriptions for the world's and the characters (including the ghosts) were vivid and easy to picture and understand. As for the characters' emotions, author had portrayed it well. I had read past the first action scene (where the mc almost die) and I was awe-struck by the execution of Author's amazing story-telling. The Author has perfect grasp of the mc's disheveled emotion and the situation he's in. The scenes were written so well that it felt like it have a momentum of its own. Like, there's a time when I got excited at how fast things was escalating, I was suddenly brought to a stop, forced to ponder over the previous paragraphs, feeling the transitions of the mc's emotions. For the story development, it's fast and captivating. Well, personally, I really like fast-paced novel so this novel truly suits my taste. With just a chapter, the book had successfully piqued my interest. How so? An action scene had taken place at the very first chapter. Not some ramblings to describe the world like some always did, but action! The enemy, the forces that was against them, and what's the conflict between them was introduced all (with vivid descriptions as well!) just by the first chapter. (If this is what you call as a hook then Author, you got me!) For the character design, it's nice I guess? Well, I could vaguely perceive the mc's personality from the way he converse (The Author is really good at conversations! It wasn't stiff and flowed out so naturally that their words carry some kind of an emotion/ tone?). And also, the way he thinks and reacts when he was in danger. It was done so well that it had successfully brought his character alive. For the world background, uhmm, how to say? I think the Author had done a lot of preparations for this. Like, there was an auxiliary chapter dedicated for this. Yes, it's separated from the story but I don't mind so, Good Job Author! And lastly for the Update Stability, it's recently updated so I don't think there's any problem with this. Overall, I really enjoy reading this book. The writing was smooth and flows so well that it was really pleasing for the eye. Honestly, this book might be too advanced for me, I think, as there are times when I need to search for the 'alien' words to understand the meanings of each sentences but of course, it's my problem, don't worry about it. So.. Thank you for writing such an amazing book!
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