there was no linit set hit him with the 300 stones for all the characters

I am fine with like 1-3 but have plot and thought to it but no pokemon harem

and he has glass in the middle of nowhere in a cultivation world

there is outside earth there is a whole universe that already exists around it

caracter is just too dumb for my tastes. h

not in English just to let people know. . .

first!!

+1

+1

xp not hp

you say 100 mil here but later say just 100,000 a few lines down.

blackfire,ivy,harley

how can he buy a 2 gold mask with 100 silver coins?

nah I would say the storys pretty good compared to a lot of trash on webnovel but its the translation that kills it for me.

needs a good editor than I think it will improve a lot .

good,good,and good good

how old is Adam . 0

good story so far word count irjdjdiseiwowkwjwjieieososjssjsowow9sosiskhudidjdjdjdeodhbrjrrbhdiddirbrirkdbjdiddjdjidrjrjdiddidjdididjdjjddj

feels like you just gave him memories of the future and a different thought style instead of si and any thing new iiiiiihhjjjijbggjjdjdjdjdjd

is this another droped novel in your list of droped novels . 1000000000⁰0011929sk quip ffhjjdjdjdjdjdidjdjdjdjddjjddjdjdjdjdjdjdjdhbxeiowsjdb