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I've read this one already. I've read this one already.

Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar! Terrible grammar!

Great story! An unusual take for a Marvel fanfic... The story is well written. I love how it illustrates the relationship between a father and his children. The difficulty of raising kids, the joy of seeing them grow and finally, the sadness felt when they eventually have to leave you... Please update...

Thank you so much... Loved the ending...

DRP. Thank you. Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.

Read this already. Drp...ed Thank you so much... thank you so much... Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...Thank you so much...