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dangerous. she is currently disguised as "Crown Prince" Qinghe. why call her princess?
how can he roar when he is being choked?
despise -> disdain
predecessor -> successor
predecessor means "the one who comes before/aheas". i think you meant to use "successor" or "heir".
what is a pregnancy home? do you mean maiden home or parental home?
suggested vocabulary change: hardened resolute -> hard resolve; resolute decision; resolute manner; stubborness
"under" Hutton's nose
vanished "into" thin air
vanished "into" thin air
fraction, not fracture
fell on his ahnds and "knees", is the correct phrase i believe
when did Taylor become Hutton? are they the same person? story flow jump here... the author assume we know who Hutton is already. đ
he is currently BEHIND her. how is her breasts pressing him to the bed? when did she start topping him?
i think you meant top six students of each "course".
laid woman... you mean, as in lying down, and not the slang for after-sex right? synonym replacemnent: prone, supine, sprawled, recumbent,
procrastination -> rescheduling, delay, postponement