LuinOrigin

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Nothing to sharre at this moment

2018-06-12 JoinedBangladesh

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LuinOrigina year ago
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is this 2nd dialogue from Bollywood movie?
"I'm done. I don't need her. I don't need anyone."His voice broke slightly, the weight of his past decisions pressing on him. But then he laughed an empty, hollow laugh that echoed off the tiled walls of the bathroom. It wasn't humor that drove the sound from his chest but the desperate need to expel the bitterness from within. "I made a commitment," he reminded himself aloud. "And when I make a commitment, I don't even listen to myself."
I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
Urban · LazyDiablo
LuinOrigin2 years ago
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can you stop using AI to write every line. its so fake?
Her stance shifted with subtle menace, hips cocked sideways and hands resting insolently on her belt.
I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
Fantasy · RighteousFilth
LuinOrigin4 years ago
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it's been while author using 6 months window. it's like no time passed since Yasmine left
I'm almost sure another key figure would get hurt there if I somehow stopped Yasmine. If it was the princess who Yasmine would be escorting, then it would be a huge problem, as she would be a major key element of the story. But I could not let Yasmine die so miserably. In the end, all I could do was get the matter in my own hands. In six months, I would get my ability to the level to a point where I could help her tackle the misfortune.
The Novel's Sidekick
Eastern · SILENTKILLER
LuinOrigin4 years ago
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Author should let that girl die. why always happy ending! anyway she had protection in the first place but making her such strong individual doesn't make sense! Author is Loli lover.
Ch 443 Bloodthirsty Shangguan Bing Xue
Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
Fantasy · XIETIAN
LuinOrigin5 years ago
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why 9 star mortal? why not 5 star?6 star? author always trying balance everyone around protagonist lvl
Ch 117 Wyba's Request
Last Wish System
Fantasy · Alemillach
LuinOrigin5 years ago
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why MC too OP? I don't see any struggle and any big opponent who can stand against him.
Ch 158 Chapter 155 Backing Up The Tough Talk
Abuse of Magic
Fantasy · Sdrawkcab

Royal Crown

In a world where mythical creatures and ancient legends are intricately woven, a young boy finds himself at a critical crossroads in his destiny. Tragedy strikes when his father, the beloved monarch, passes away, plunging the kingdom into mourning and uncertainty. Unexpectedly, the boy is crowned as the new king, burdened with a tremendous weight of responsibility that he feels unprepared to bear. Yet, destiny has a remarkable surprise in store for him—a majestic white fox with nine tails becomes his most extraordinary and powerful companion. Together, they embark on a journey where power, politics, and magic converge in the heart of the kingdom, and amidst it all, lies the crown that now rests on his head.

LuinOrigin · Fantasy

4 Chs