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Is it weird that for about half of this I didn't know that they were adults until Amar came out with coffee, FORGOT immediately after and assumed that they were STILL KIDS having an intense soliloquy while playing with rubber balls until the word *kiss* came up? You might wonder how I misunderstood this but I have nieces and nephews who do something similar so I really didnt find it strange, just confusing. P.S. I read it over and wondering who Rosa's partner was. Is it Amar? I know it's not Lucas but is it pirate guy? If I'm basing it off on my own ship then I'd rather it be Amar since they'd been my go to since the beginning.
Rosa screamed for the both of us. It really makes me wonder why Amar is getting the back end of the stick. Even if he is his mother's child. I REALLY hope he gets a better life after this, my boy suffered too much for this. As for Rosalia's powers she feels so similar to a conduit. She channels magic from other people and somehow makes it her own? Not sure. But I'm so glad that you're again. I hope you feel better and thank you for the chapter
I literally honest to God thought that the bag that she brought back from her dream was a fully automated toilet. I kept on thinking that she had her priorities right even though she was hearing herself screaming in the background.