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Prince_of_Thieves1yrCommentedWell, there does exist a verse in the Bible where there is a statement that God will spit out lukewarm believers. Middle ground doesn't really exist for some monotheistic religions like Islam and Christianity.
This paragraph has been deleted.- Prince_of_Thieves1yrReplied to OnanMaster
The Night King and his army should only come in 20 or something years. IF you're telling me that even with the existence of the Dragonborn and an amount of prep-time that would make Batman drool, Westeros still doesn't stand a chance without learning Thu'um, then sorry to say it, but it was meant to be.
Can Westerosi people even Learn the Tuum if I try to teach them?? got close to 20 years to experiment. I bet Quiburn would be interested. poaching him from the citadel the first chance I get. - Prince_of_Thieves1yrCommented
A bit unnecessary.
"BOY listen close." the kid stiffened up like a seasoned log "I'm from a Land called Skyrim I killed many who were deserving... and many who were not. we are the men we chose to be. keep your head high and fear no darkness. I ride now. Ride for Victory. Ruin and The world's ending. FORTH EORLINGAS!" mixing up Kratos and the Rohirrim charge speech just to fuck with the kid. before I kicked the horse and rode south - Prince_of_Thieves1yrCommented
Why would you want to?
Can Westerosi people even Learn the Tuum if I try to teach them?? got close to 20 years to experiment. I bet Quiburn would be interested. poaching him from the citadel the first chance I get. - Prince_of_Thieves1yrCommented
He grew five inches. How is it too BIG for him?
Harry woke up at 5AM next morning to complete physical training quest before 9 AM. After brushing his teeth and taking a bath Harry gets in his tracksuit which is a tab too big for him. 'I need to shop for clothes as soon as possible.' He thought about going today but gave up the idea as it would alert Dumbledore's spy. - Prince_of_Thieves1yrCommented
I don't know, Finn dodged responsibility more often than Jack Sparrow dodged STDs. He would probably try to avoid the blame.
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This is giving me bad vibes. The MC already realized he can't trust other people with the powers he gave away. He should understand why, at least to an extent, Nie Li didn't teach others how to get strong enough to threaten him. Don't make him turn stupid now. I never understand the author's who make the MC some type of magic-granting genie to all of his friends, up to the point where even some random stranger is given reality-warping powers.
Another reason might be because of his childish behaviour. Although he wanted to protect the city, he didn't give cultivation techniques to everyone." Ye Han deduced and went back to his herbs testing. - Prince_of_Thieves1yrCommented
Don't keep them close. They can be brothers, but they're not friends.
"Why, you told me he treated you like trash and always acted like you weren't worth his time?" Mizore said. - Prince_of_Thieves1yrReplied to romeotango148
Yes, but history likewise didn't end in the 30s.
" Him name is Aryan Stark,'' she said tiredly dreaming of her and Brandon raising him together. - Prince_of_Thieves2yrCommented
Not the best name choice. Don't know if you know, but there's kind of a negative history attached.
" Him name is Aryan Stark,'' she said tiredly dreaming of her and Brandon raising him together. - Prince_of_Thieves2yrCommented
How can he not win easily? The protagonists might have been talented, but none of them trained until they were teens, and they didn't have his borderline supernatural ability. If he doesn't win easily, I'm dropping.
After enjoying the lollipop, he began to think 'It's nice not to be able to defeat someone much stronger than me, since I'm in a series about fighting, it wouldn't be any fun to win easily. - Prince_of_Thieves2yrCommented
DC and Marvel crossovers always get convoluted, in my opinion. I think your take on the superhero civil war is already plenty original.
How would you guys feel if I introduced other characters from DC like say captain atom or a flash? Just to make things a little more original - Prince_of_Thieves2yrCommented
I spent way too much time figuring out that anagram, but it was worth it. Sort of.
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Home-schooling is a thing.
" I've never been to school before. This should be fun." - Prince_of_Thieves2yrReplied to FalseProphet_
Interesting.
"God, please be with us and help Will succeed." - Prince_of_Thieves2yrReplied to twidilynob
Ok, but then later in the story, or maybe before, he talks about how he's going to get power by being loved by the commoners. Right now, he's just working with the surrounding farmers, that's not nearly enough influence for the type of power that he actually expects. And, he can't take credit for designing, or implementing any of these new ideas because he didn't make it, and he's only the heir. I guess my problem is that the protagonist is going to get his desire, but if he does, it won't make sense if things stay as they are now.
He felt as if Ludwig could be trusted and willing to take the credit for the inventions if he asked. As such, he spent the next hour drafting plans for a Beehive Oven. Which was the best method currently available for turning Coal into Coke. Something which would prove to be vital in the functioning of the blast furnaces. - Prince_of_Thieves2yrCommented
Convoluted is an understatement.
After careful deliberation, Ludwig agreed; he did not need to know why Berengar shifted the invention into his hands. After all, it probably included some convoluted court schemes with which he wanted nothing to do with. If his fifty-seven years alive had taught him anything, it's that it is best to avoid the affairs of noblemen. - Prince_of_Thieves2yrCommented
Why wouldn't the MC take credit? It sounds ridiculously stupid if he doesn't.
He felt as if Ludwig could be trusted and willing to take the credit for the inventions if he asked. As such, he spent the next hour drafting plans for a Beehive Oven. Which was the best method currently available for turning Coal into Coke. Something which would prove to be vital in the functioning of the blast furnaces. - Prince_of_Thieves2yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.