TheCynicalStrayCAt

please don't drag the Veronica plotline any longer than it should.

Lana is a good name.. especially when you read it backwards .

you've outdone yourself with this latest 2 chapters author.

in my humble opinion.. I think lionheart is already a great house name.. just stick with that since you already used it as Galahad's last name .

don't sell yourself short my guy.. its a good story

the premise, narration and story development are good BUT the dialogue?? it's absolute shit! cringe and stupid. I powered through 30 chapters but I just cant continue reading this, it gets stupider and stupider the more I read .

I just found out that there really is an Adler family in the canon of modern family they live just a few houses down from jay.

one of the best fanfics on this app..... ...,...............................................

quick question... how do you scream eloquently?

a quick prediction here... his ex-wife will find out about his success and will try to win him back . 😂😂😂