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Im currently working on another project, a Danmachi fic, but i’ll release a chapter of this one tomorrow, just for you🥰
Thank you for the critique. While I can see why you would think that Jayden and Goku lose all fights, with the newest chapter having Jayden fight the Ox King, that isn’t the case. While writing the chapter, I did a quick google search for the Ox King’s powerlevel, and it came up as 900. That’s simply innacurate at this point of the plot, so I had to make up a power level of my own. I removed a zero, making it 90, half that of Jayden’s current strength. As you know, power levels in Dragon Ball don’t mean shit. They used to matter, only when Raditz came to earth, now they’re just meaningless numbers. While the Ox King does have a power level of 90, half that of Jayden’s, it doesn’t mean he is weaker. Half of Jayden’s strength comes from his ridiculous durability, while the other is from his Ki. He’s a scrub otherwise. The Ox King trained under Master Roshi, he has a vast combat experiance, and the strength to use that experiance, that’s why he was able to keep up with Jayden, any other regular villain they came up against was quickly defeated. I just felt that I had to explain myself, either way thank you for the review, i’ll try to explain things more clearly in my chapters from now on. As for sticking to the original plot, that will end as soon as they find the dragon balls, things will take a turn then. Kudos💕
Funnily enough, in my native language we say ‘let’s go outside and sip some tobacco’ for taking a smoke break.
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I’ll let you know if I ever decide to do this, I’ll keep it in mind.
Ask and you shall receive, coming soon!
Mb, havent seen dxd in a while, thanks for pointing that out
To be fair, she mostly went there to check out the establishment, all she did was ask questions to Viktor about how he’s running the place and if everything was done legally
Ill post it in the next chapter, expect it soon