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This seems like the usual version of The Little Mermaid, but it isn't. And with daily updates, how different it is will soon be evident. It's well-written and worth reading.

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Artfully written with something to guess and look forward to in every chapter. Great work!

This is an interesting read. The writing style, particularly the vocabulary, can be improved but the premise and the plot is intriguing. The narrative also has a good creative flow.

This an interesting read. I like the pacing of the story. There's something exciting happening in every chapter. I also like how the chapters close with something to look forward to in the next one. Keep writing!

This is an interesting read. I like how the descriptions in the narrative flow, and how the scenes unfold. The plot is also quite intriguing.

This is a really intriguing read. I like the sudden twists and turns in the story. It leaves me curious and excited to see how things will unfold for Faith.

This is a well-written novel. I love how vivid the world-building is, and the artistic flow of the narrative. The character and plot setup is new to me, which makes it a really refreshing read. Each chapter makes you look forward to what's going to happen next. Great work!