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is size of VW Bug. they built the plane around the gun. the front landing gear is offset due to gun. the barrel is even offset due the the centrifugal force of the barrel spinning would cause the plane to want to twist when mounted centrally. the cockpit is a titanium tub to protect from small arms fire. it can fly with only one engine. and lastly, out of over 8k sorties, only 7 have ever been shot down since 1991, they have redundant redundancies. thank you for attending my Ted talk, I love a-10s and am sad they are being retired
note for author. this is constructive feedback. you can't have narrative adjustments, it causes confusion and, in writing, it is incorrect. If you chose first person omniscient, you can't change to another individual to be first person. The POV should always be on Cera. I'm saying this as an English major. If you hire a professional editor, they will change those scenes to be purely 3rd person. Example: COO "slammed his fist on the table" I should only used by other characters when in dialogue, be that internal or spoken, not in description of actions. Not even Tolkien, R.R. Martin, or Rowlings used this style. Bronte and Dickens didn't either. The set perspectives are First person and third person with addition of omniscient or not. In first person, you choose a person as your perspective, then you don't change it. That's what people are trying to state and it should be taken as constructive feedback, not "get better at English" As an English major, am I wrong now too? Do I need to get better at English? yI enjoyed your story and dedication, buy that comment lost some respect
I appreciate the conversation between Eggor and Freya so much. As someone who has done exactly the same as Lino, stood at the edge of the abyss and thought myself weaker for it, thank you author. Thank you for the easing the feeling of weakness for stepping away from the ledge and not committing to the abyss, instead replacing that feeling with strength for staying around. Thank you.
because authors don't do the simple googling. One author probably didn't look up a description for the kobold or gnoll and created his story, then people saw that work, dont have a history of dnd or video games and took it as what a gnoll or kobold looked like, the the cycle propagates. the amount of people who have stated that in Re:Monster the kobolds are dog like is quite many, and that's just one manga
Kobold through Germanic lore had three forms, small humanoids, animals, or flame. Kobold through DnD, practically the go to to describe a fantasy monster, is, even in the infancy of descriptions, described as having dog ear, scales and rat tails. More recent DnD descriptions have been lizard or dragonoid with smaller stature