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TDissonance

TDissonance

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2018-06-08 JoinedUnited States
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  • TDissonance
    TDissonance1mth
    Commented

    Did Torment predict what previous-Sunny would do and prepare something for Cassie?

    After wasting its time for months, the shadow that had been following Cassie finally noticed something strange about her movements.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • TDissonance
    TDissonance9mth
    Replied to Gregory_Halye

    nope, it doesn't refer to her power at all. it's saying she's a small idiot. you're thinking of chikara which is power, chiisana is small. and everyone knows what baka is.

    "I think she might just kill herself like this! Ahahaha! Nante chīsana bakananda!"
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    New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live
    Games · Galanar
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  • TDissonance
    TDissonance9mth
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    Unfortunately I'm dropping this at chapter 900.Pros:The author writes at a steady pace and lets readers know if there will be any interruptions to the schedule.The grammar is fine, more or less. Sometimes the wrong homophone is used or some other typo pops up but they're sporadic enough to not be irritating.Cons:Prose isn't anything to write home about. The author goes for quantity over quality and that sometimes leads to repetitive phrases and slow pacing.Possibly my fault for misinterpreting the synopsis but this is a cultivation novel, not a sci-fi or fantasy novel. The explanations for many things are handwaved as "higher dimension=stronger", and how someone at a higher dimensional level is a God to someone at the dimensions below them, yet the main character somehow manages to battle across multiple dimension levels. At some point you stretch too far and the suspension of disbelief breaks.The power system is convoluted with too many aspects fighting for your attention. Each person can have possibly many Lineage Factors with each having multiple branches and uses, a dimension level for their ability, a dimension level for their body, a dimension level for their mind, a dimension level for their existence?? as well as various miscellaneous strength improvements like elemental affinity, mage aptitude, styles of combat, battle techniques, domains, and more.The character development is terrible. There is our main character, and then there is his damsel in distress. There is so much buildup for the main character to finally find a purpose in life, saying that he'll be a monster when he has a goal to work towards. That goal ends up being possibly the most common one you can find in any wuxia.Before this point, which is very late into the story, all of the main character's actions are driven by him wanting to help his love interest. The plot armor gets extra plating whenever she's in trouble, and the main character will drastically improve his strength somehow without fail in order to save her. She isn't even weak herself, but the author constantly writes her getting into trouble that she's helpless against but the main character is always able to save her. Her emotional maturity also never develops since her introduction. The novel would benefit immensely if she was just taken out of the story.The poor character development of those two characters wouldn't stand out as much if it wasn't for the fact that there are zero developed side characters. Most of them will fit into a trope and never develop beyond.

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    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • TDissonance
    TDissonance1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 103 The Padre's Plan
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • TDissonance
    TDissonance1yr
    Replied to MidGard

    yeah, what I mean is that 99% winrate means that there were at least 100 games, for every 99 wins there would be 1 loss. But even if you place that loss right in the middle of the win streak that would lead to a streak of 49 wins and a streak of 50 wins. those are the lowest possible win streak numbers for 99% winrate, otherwise you could also have things like 20 wins, 1 loss, 79 win streak, ect. even with 98% winrate that simplifies to 49 wins and 1 loss. lowest number streaks in this case are 24 and 25.

    For the win streak, he has already broken Noble Tibus's record of having seventeen wins consecutively!
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • TDissonance
    TDissonance1yr
    Commented

    werewolf king had a 99% winrate which would mean he had a longer win streak... 99% means 1 loss to 99 wins, 98% means 2 loss to 98 wins

    For the win streak, he has already broken Noble Tibus's record of having seventeen wins consecutively!
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    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • TDissonance
    TDissonance1yr
    Commented

    So, Monster Hunter's gunlance. Wonder if we'll get any other rocket boosted weapons

    Ch 4658 Prejudged Candidates
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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • TDissonance
    TDissonance3yr
    Commented

    pecuniary = relating to money, from latin "pecunia"... meaning money

    On the forum, everybody discussed the pecuniary prospects of the Mage as a class.
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    Mages Are Too OP
    Games · Soaring Flames
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