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pretty sure this is AI generated. that's the issue with AI it's not able to handle longer stories because it can't remember all the context and it goes back to using canon. also explains why your chapters are this short.

7 Chapters out (That are combined as long as a single chapter) and already begging for patreons. Sorry but if you want people to pay for your shit (which is not even allowed btw.) you gotta make them want to pay

Sorry, but I don't feel dumb reading your comment. You really shouldn't call people dumb and then immediately prove your own lack of intelligence—you're only embarrassing yourself. Not to mention, replying to a year-old comment just makes you seem desperate.

who'd have taught that reincarnation is unrealistic. but somehow you aren't questioning how the memories from his past self's brain got transferred to this other brain in a fictional universe

did I miss something? They are still in a game no? I mean sure they are trapped in the game and they'll die for real if they die but it's still a game and the mobs and npcs are still bundles of code.

Small advise. you don't get more readers by being annoying. The only thing this wall of text does is make me eye-roll and speedscroll past it. I've never felt less tempted to read something or donate money. And it also kills my desire to continue reading. Maybe try looking at it from the viewers perspective.

The story is well written but we're now at chapter 91 and the MC is still 14 years old and still figuring out his powers (not because he's just getting more and more powers) we've until now only had 1 mention of the name Blacksteel and that was only a vision from the future so I highly doubt that it will ever get to this point. Until now the mc didn't have any real reason to use his powers except for maybe 2 scenes. I also didn't see even one scene where I had the feeling, that the mc had an average intelligence not to mention above average. also the sex scenes are terrible I recommend skipping them(did I mention 14 yo?). It would probably be a 2 Star if it weren't for the update stability and the good writing quality

for me*

If you think that's how a person with a good heart acts I recommend therapy. Anyway that chapter really destroyed the story