shadow_sage

i would love to see him make or summon some space Marines so he is not doing everything by himself.

is there a update scheduled?

the uzumaki was a sensor technique not a dojutsu even though it has eye in its name. but you are right on there are others than just those 2.

what are these names of spells are they oc spells or do you justnot care to do a proper translation

+1

I just found your book and I don't say this to be mean. But you have a bunch of run on sentence. I think you mean to put periods instead of comas ie instead of (she is running,) you should put it (she is running. ) I just wanted you to know. sorry if this came out rude. I just want to see this book improve because it is interesting.

thanks for the chapter

don't waste your time you can't read it on here . it would be different if they mentioned it in the synopsis but they don't. 1 star

I think the back story is good but I would like to get back to the ncis part soon

why is he troubled isn't it just battle meditation that was used by the jedi?