teddylam
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hi i'm a male, live in Mauritius.Enjoying life and self employed. Currently preparing to write a book
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teddylam1yrCommentederror again author. to tear, is the correct word
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author error. sold off as cattle, is the correct one. solved off as cattle isn't incorrect but it's not a good word for this sentence
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error author. I would kill you right now and find a way replacement. (correct wording)
"You should consider yourself lucky that you're the only human that I was able to find in this miserable world that has the Devil-Yang Body. Otherwise I would could you right now and find a replacement," the creature growled, his words sending both fear and relief through Asuros. Relief that he would not die right now, but fear that he could at any moment should his master find another replacement. - teddylam1yrCommented
to "perfection", author! u said perfecting, it's wrong
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author error in typing. he had been born in such a "state" (is the correct wording. you didn't write "state", you wrote "aste"
Now however, the strange energy was joining these two separate 'allies' into one, something that John didn't even know was possible. The dragonblood he had absorbed earlier began to fully assimilate with his flesh, sinew, and muscles, becoming as if he had been born in such a aste. At the same time, the dragonbones that he had absorbed fused with his bones as well, as if they had always been one in the same. The process was beyond shocking, and also beyond painful. - teddylam1yrCommentedCh 719 Baptism in Blood
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the paragraph is missing words
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yes sulling his blood, making his blood impure other question, it's because of the asura blood
The dragon blood flowed into his skin, muscles, sinew, merging with it and transforming it into something stronger, something more profound. Wherever the blood passed, it infused with his body, strengthening it to incredible heights. It attempted to do the same with his own blood, but was unable to, as if his blood would not allow it to be sullied at all, not even by dragon's blood. After a brief struggle, the dragon's blood seemed to give up on merging with his own, and instead flowed freely within his veins next to his original blood. - teddylam1yrReplied to nkeeavenlymortal
- teddylam1yrReplied to SaroviaCh 828 Chapter 828 The 'City of Immortals'
- teddylam1yrCommentedCh 575 Give and Request Information
- teddylam1yrReplied to SaroviaCh 828 Chapter 828 The 'City of Immortals'