Honestly? I have pretty much dropped this story. I had no plans going into it, and was just making stuff up as I went along. Now I have had writer's block for over 6 months, and have been unable to come up with any plotlines for the New World Arcs. If this story does update once more, it will likely just be a chapter detailing their training over the two years, and then it will go back on hiatus.

There are a few types of errors. The most common ones are those that most people's brains just tend to skip over, and then there are those that cause you to stop and reread it a few times. I assume most of the errors you have had are the first kind, and they don't really matter unless you are trying to publish a professional book. This one is the former though, which is why my brain caught it. Good work on the story so far, I am loving it and looking forward to seeing what you do with it in the future.

I would probably replace the "used to" with "in the past." though I have to say it is impressive that we are already 42 chapters in and I am only now noticing the first mistake.

I agree with you, I am saying that I believe that both Garp and Akainu follow what they want to do. You can see Garp doing this by how he always ignores orders and eats his rice cakes, while akainu's belief in absolute justice pushes him and he will do absolutely anything to achieve his goal. Although the war seemed to counteract that belief with Garp, I believe that should Ace have asked Garp for help, he would have thrown everything away to save him. The argument about Garp or Sengoku being a conqueror who works under others was to try to say my OC working under a non-conqueror was not that far-fetched. This whole conversation seems to have gone in circles and gotten confusing, so I apologise for that.

I am a bit confused at this comment. I said that the thing I said about Garp earlier applies to Sengoku. He still joined the marines and served under many non-conquerors before he reached fleet admiral. It is also my belief that there is no way that both Garp and Akainu don't have conquerors, it just hasn't been shown yet. If they do not In canon, then in this AU they do have it.

Poor use of diction, sorry about that. I meant to say malnutrition, but must have put anorexia by mistake.

Same thing applies to sengoku, then.

Any thing like that won't be for a while, that is a side storyline, while the main one is focused on action/adventure.

I believe that there is a higher chance for the devil fruit to reincarnate in a close by fruit, but it could also reincarnate halfway around the world. The world government likely don't want to risk the chance of devil fruits reincarnating and falling into other pirates hands, so they don't use such a method.

There are multiple female characters within the story, that could be considered main characters. Though there is only one love interest.

Worldly.

I agree completely, and I thought I had left one in, but I must have deleted it with one of the drafted fights against him. I will try and edit it to put one of them back in later on today, when I have some time.

Yes, I can see how it is hypocritical, but think of this as him just trying to find a reason to punch him, because he wants to but doesn't want to feel like a monster who goes around punching anyone. That is also why he didn't punch the lady, because she hadn't done anything to him so he felt if he punched her he would be going against his own morals, even if inside he wanted to. This can be seen later on in the chapter where he can easily save her, but doesn't move at all.

A better description would be not a shred of loose fat. As in he is about 10-12% body fat.

That would be an awesome idea for a fic. having someone with the knowledge to fuse devil fruits into objects create an armour with abilities like magnet, darkness, gravity, barrier, slowness, and anything else they can find.

Yeah, but he only saves his friends. It just so happens that he becomes friends with everyone in oppressed countries, so he rushes in to save them.

Oh, lol. I only watched the first season, and it was always believed that he destroyed the moon. Just looked it up and it was caused by trying to do the same experiment that gave koro sensei his powers on a rat, causing instability and an explosion big enough to destroy the moon. Sorry for the misinfo.

I wrote a confrontation with Doflamingos multiple time, but every time I did it ended up being too big that the rest of the war disappeared in comparison. Because they both have Haoshoku (even if Carter's is barely awakened) when they clash it would send off waves of Haoshoku. that would have grabbed the attention of the entire marines, and I wasn't ready for that confrontation for now, so I left it alone.

Yeah, but I doubt she got permission from the royal family of ryugu. Koala learned under Hack, I believe, and became proficient enough to be an instructor.

There were a few things I wasn't too happy about with this chapter, Doflamingos quote would have been fun to include, Whitebeards declaration of the one piece being real was a great moment but he said it as he died, so it didn't really fit. I found it hard to come up with a good way to make Luffy a rival for my OC, as I am not very good at getting inside a character's mind yet, especially one as empty as Luffys. I guess I could have had Carter say "Get stronger than me, or I will eat all your meat" Anyone who reads this, if you have any constructive criticism, feel free to provide it.